Time crack!
"Flying Ling Farewell …" With Antonio’s voice, Ling Feiyang’s body was gradually sucked into this air crack! to be continued
tail
Ten years ago
In April in the south of the Yangtze River, yingfei grass grows in Peach Blossom Island, and the pink and delicate peach blossoms are still brilliant.
"People don’t know where to go, but peach blossoms still smile in the spring breeze …" Huang Rong whispered a poem by Cui Hu, a poet of the Tang Dynasty, walking in the pink peach blossoms.
"Brother Feiyang, in recent days, the Song State has finally restored unprecedented peace, but can you see it?" Huang Rong sighed softly, and her eyes were already wet.
"I have seen Rong Er!" As the voice suddenly appeared in front of Huang Rong, there was an air crack. The man who made her dream came out of this crack!
Ling Feiyang!
Huang Rong’s face, which is displayed in front of Ling Feiyang, has grown up a lot, and her figure has also become plump. Finally, she has changed from a Grinch girl to a beautiful and graceful lady.
"Flying brother!" Huang Rong saw Ling Feiyang and could hardly believe his eyes suddenly descended on him and hugged Ling Feiyang’s waist tightly.
"Rong Er, do you remember the promise I made before the decisive battle with Genghis Khan?" Ling Feiyang asked Huang Rong.
"Never give up for life … you really did it, brother Feiyang …" Huang Rong was touched by the ground and suddenly stood on tiptoe and kissed Ling Feiyang’s lips gently.
"Sister Bing Xin, they all come to Peach Blossom Island as a guest. I’ll take you to see them later! But before I take you to see them, you have to do one thing with me! " Huang Rong took Ling Fei whisking and skipped to the depths of the peach blossom bushes like a little girl.
What do you want to do Ling Feiyang? Of course, before the decisive battle of Genghis Khan, the two men have officially become husband and wife. Huang Rong has been waiting for this for a long time.
However, even Huang Rong didn’t think that two people were running among peach blossoms but met Huang Yaoshi head-on.
"It’s not that easy to get my Rong Er!" Huang Yaoshi said to Ling Feiyang with a clear and handsome face, "Ling Feiyang, if you want to be worthy of my ten beauties, you must pass the test of old age!"
"Father-in-law, please enlighten me!" Ling Feiyang immediately said
"Your martial arts is the first old school in the world, not to test your martial arts!" Huang Yaoshi ha ha smiled and continued, "The old man is going to test you on nine questions, namely, piano skills, chess skills, law, painting, astrology, poetry, couplets and riddles. Take that! Ha ha ha ha ha! "
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Youth glory
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foreword
First of all, readers can skip this part of the story directly.
In fact, the novel "Youth Glory" was originally thought about four years ago, when I just came into contact with the publishing media such as the Internet.
Early online novels were not as messy as they are now, but they all had good strength at that time. Moreover, the earliest novels were less, and each one would look at nature carefully, so that it would be better to appreciate the spirituality endowed by the author. Unlike now, hundreds of new novels are baked every day, but it is more difficult than in those years to find one that is not eunuch and meets one’s appetite.
After staying at the starting point for so many years, I have also seen a change in sports novels, especially basketball novels, from winning to declining, and now the temperature is gradually rising. But in any case, basketball novels are all "online novels", and a marginal body in this large scope is football, basketball or other sports.
During this period, I read Lin Haida’s two novels, "Do you care if I play football" and "We are champions", which helped me a lot. I realized the soul he gave me from Lin Haida’s competitive novels.
I suddenly realized that a good film is not the so-called "background", "plot", "character" and "appropriate YY", but more importantly, it is the "soul", and I am now trying to give the soul to Teenager.
The earliest and most impressive basketball novel is Dream of Flying Basketball, which I believe is impressed by all my friends in the early days. It created a precedent for online competitive novels, and let us (at least let me) know that online novels can not only write fantasy and magic, but also write competitive novels. However, I don’t like this novel very much because it adds Chinese martial arts elements.
Since Flying, a number of basketball novels have been published one after another. This is a peak of basketball novels-campus basketball situation.
It was not until the end of six years that this film was officially finished. There were some contradictions and disputes between the author and the starting point. I am not a party and I am not sure.
But I have to say that this film is still a classic up to now, and I believe it will follow basketball novels now. A large part of readers have read or heard of campus basketball. I still remember the four-year summer file, and a large number of small white readers went to the campus comment area early in the morning to chat and fart. When it was updated in the early days, it was updated very quickly, and it was 10 thousand a day, which was a fast speed now, not to mention the popularity of the 2K party in the internet age
Later, for various reasons, this novel faded out of our sight (although I still read it from time to time), and it also declared that the peak period of basketball novels has turned from prosperity to decline. Now, although there is a resurgence, it still can’t reach the starting point of "Campus"-you can imagine how difficult it is for an almost semi-J competitive novel to get 67 million hits in previous years …
Later, basketball novels had a gradual warming process. For example, Hong Fengda’s "Fat Ball King" was a creative and well-written novel, and now he has been at the forefront of basketball novels in terms of creativity in "Court Oracle"
Another group of writers who write NBA novels are all good, except that I like chimneys. "This is the center" and many writers who love basketball are quietly trying to write … but unfortunately, they have not reached the peak of the campus.
Let’s put the topic back to the main point.
It was at that time that "Youth Glory" had its embryonic form in my mind, a basketball novel, especially a basketball novel that highlighted the word "youth"
What I can write is not much, unlike the starting basketball novel, which can make the protagonist in the NBA all-powerful. What I can write is more about these teenagers. Perhaps these things are too pure and monotonous for many people, but I want to say that even so, my original purpose in writing Teenagers is to slowly introduce these extraordinary things that have appeared in my mind to you. These families, growing environments, personalities and styles of football are all different. I think about what will happen to teenagers around them.
It took me a whole year to fill in a framework for completing this novel, and I have written tens of thousands of words just by combing the structure of the half part of the novel, which does not include all kinds of conflicts and foreshadowing.
Take the place where I am writing now. I just finished section 16 before this nagging. In the first 16 sections of 40 thousand words, I have tried my best to make many different images appear naturally.
Yin Yun, who is mature, calm and steady, is aloof but trustworthy. Sun Yu, half a bucket of water shakes and makes you feel funny. Xue Yintong and Zhao Taozhe always have a hard time. Chu Chenxi, a talented boy with sharp personality, and so on. Although I have shown it to a few friends, some people say that it is not necessary to paint all the characters too carefully and mainly improve the image of the protagonist, I still insist on doing so because in my heart these are the characters who will live next to the protagonist.
To me, they are the only real people living in my mind. I can hear them talking to me every day-
Yin Yun (said steadily), "We must enter the semi-finals this year!"
Xue Yin copper (threw a glad eye) "Ogawa classmate you are not honest! I’m not that bad. At least in the face of ordinary students, I can get it easily. Don’t write me so badly … "
Zhao Taozhe (kicked Xue Yin copper) "Are you stupid and want to be a master? The somebody else ji cold haven’t spoken … "
JiHanTian (smile) "ahem … it’s my turn? Although I am the leading role … But the scenes will not be much more than everyone else … "
ChuChen hope (coldly looking at ji cold) "what are you? The protagonist should be tall and handsome. "
So I will be a few strokes away from portraying the protagonist, and I will draw everyone one by one. Of course, the emphasis is also different
In fact, I believe that if everyone keeps looking at them, they can find themselves or people around them. I try my best to write down everyone’s personality characteristics. From all aspects of language details, I know it’s much more difficult than letting a very good B protagonist YY in the NBA at will, but I still try my best to make them "live" and not a cold name.
I think reading a novel, especially a team sports novel such as basketball, if you finally remember the protagonist’s name (even this one), how can he get mad and reverse when he is backward, but other than that, I have no impression of this novel at all … I think this is a great failure.
I was deeply impressed by an advertisement related to basketball, that is, "Brothers don’t play basketball".
It is true that basketball is a five-person sport, and everyone is an indispensable individual on the court. If these teammates come to highlight how awesome the protagonist is, B (I emphasize the word "B"), how much the protagonist worships when he completes an incredible attack. I want to say that this is not a brother, not a friend, not a teammate, but a FANS, and teammates are the people who give him the greatest help when he attacks. They are not only walk-on supporting roles, but also protagonists! The only difference is that "leading the lead" and "starring". Basketball is a five-person sport, and only with exquisite cooperation can there be a wonderful game, not just a solo dance! This is the most important point.
I believe that although everyone likes YY, including me, if we choose, a group of flesh and blood will be like being around us, and the story of teenagers will be much more memorable than that of Niu B, the protagonist who has played all the NBA stories. Of course, YY is necessary, but it is still a moderate problem in general, but anyway, we don’t know what the NBA world is, and it is difficult to really build the real world, which is one of the reasons why I finally decided not to write NBA stories.
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I have made enough preparations for this novel "Teenager" before I started writing, which makes me confident enough to finish this novel. In fact, I crossed the pit at the starting point a few years ago and was also a little eunuch who stopped writing less than 100,000 words.
So I know that if I don’t try my best to fill every gap in the outline, I may not be able to meet it in the end, but please believe that this novel, which has filled my department’s energy (for now), will not be abandoned at will. In that case, I won’t be embarrassed to come to the starting point again. Maybe it will be very bleak in the end-I have thought about this possibility, but I will try my best to finish it.
Maybe this novel is a little slow-heating, which is not optimistic for the development of novels in the network environment. If you want to be jealous of YY, want to be cool, want beautiful women to prostrate on their feet in groups, want the protagonist to look down with one eye, want everyone to know that he is the best in the world after seeing the protagonist … Then I am very grateful to you when you see this. You can click on the gorgeous fork in the right corner of the screen.
But if you want to review a year of passionate youth and frivolous youth, please have a glass of water and sit quietly and watch these galloping teenagers play stories that belong to them and you.